All Comments on 'Shifting Fortunes Ch. 06'

it was a great chapter you have my interest please post again soon

This was a nice chapter. They truly discovered eachother in this chapter. From the hot sex, to the realization that it was more than hot sex, to the sharing or rather bearing of the souls. I expect the "Worthless Ass Hole" aka Earl Rutherford to start causing some real problems in the next chapter. As always you leave me wanting more, which could only mean I like your story.

It was good to get read more about Sam's childhood and of course I'm happy to see Sam and Jake getting closer.

Thanks for your nice comments :o) Hopefully the next chapter will be up sooner as I am already part way through writing it. Now that Jake and Sam have found their way together, it's time for them to tackle their demons.

Together they have not only discovered love but also the determination to stop the abuse. I hope that they can band together with others of their kind to fight for their rights and really make a difference. Right now I think that they are living to keep each other safe. It's a good start. This is turning out to be a great story!

You clearly have an amazing talent and the way your story is developing reminds me of another amazing writer on here by the name of Whitesabretooth....please check her out and you will see what I mean. I can't wait to see you go in to detail on Jakes story and then watch both of them overcome their fears and destroy their demons. Very nice for your first try on here....keep up the great work, dont stop once their story has come to an end.....bleed it into another story and keep it going :)

I usually don't read stories about shifters but this one is really engrossing. I'm so glad I found it! Please post the next chapter soon!!

I luved the whole story, and can hardly wait for the next chapter.

To have so much pain and hate in such a young person is scary, even though I do understand being abused just because you are different or because they can. I just hope that this hate will not destroy this girl. (I do know this is just a story.... shesh)

In other words it's like I am right there and watching all this happening and I cannot even help... (sob... sigh..)

Thanks and please keep the story going...

more please!

Why have you not finished this story? It's so good!

Please continue this its soooo good.

Has some serious potential! Not that it hasn't already delivered but this could turn into a fantastic series given the chance

Loved it.. Great story

Is this it??Where is an ending...i know its been almost 2 years since this was posted,so an end to it is probably out of the question,,,It was great while it lasted...

Why didn't you continue writing? It's really a wonderful tale and well written. A pity that you have given up on it.