All Comments on 'Ship's Whore Ch. 04: Doll'

There are occasions when I think I might have that mood enhancer, very minimal play on my nipples and I turn into a sex starved fiend too 😉

I thought the subtle blackmailing of the captain was absolutely perfect. Oh and I can just imagine bondage in zero G, yum.

Really enjoying your imagination and looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

You're very welcome - thanks for commenting!

Especially thanks for confirming it's realistic!

Anonymous, you stole my comment. I hope Sam makes it to the stars.

Amazing story. Can't wait for more. Five stars!

One step at a time...

I love the way you are working the various fetishes into your story. Do wish the submissions were longer, though.

The fetishes are certainly fun but also quite tricky to keep real. Or semi-real, anyway.

Most of my stories end up as 1-2 pages, and it's a valid criticism to say I should take longer to explore the characters and events. While I have written some longer works, once it gets into novelette territory, I feel it really needs to better plotted out and developed.

Many thanks for reading and commenting. This series is one I've put a lot of thought into, and it means a lot that people are enjoying it.

I edited once for a guy who was writing a chapter story and trying to get one chapter into each of the Literotica categories. It was pretty fun although his writing required a lot of editing to fix the grammar issues and still wasn't nearly as good as yours.

Anyway, I like how you are hitting multiple categories and working in as many different fetishes as possible. It's great stuff - keep going.

I was worried about this one. One person's doll fetish is another's rape trigger...

I'd like to see what more she wanted from Captain Li's visits. In detail. A final week after the blackmail. Changing the recording week. Li, unrestrained using her body with few limits. Ooooohhhh!