All Comments on 'Shipwrecked on an Island'

Great story with unexpected results. Where can I find this fruit? Hope to read more of your stories like this.

Beautiful

Did he wearing a woman after they got off the island and do you have any more children with Eric

A great story and I loved how the changes occurred slowly and we're not pronounced when it started.

It added some depth to the story

Well, the basic idea for the story was OK. But you should spend a little more time proof-reading what you write... or have somebody else proof-read it (which is probably best).

That way you might correct the parts such as "...I start to come too." "...the currant took me here,"

and "...I'm sure you probably thirty now". But it might have been deliberate. Too funny if it was.

I find adding the tag 'mpreg' pointless and feel little tricked considering to what I had read has no dude giving birth, but instead he is transformed into female who then got pregnant— which supposedly contradicts 'mpreg' by means. Nonetheless, it is a great story👍