by Georgepat
... I was confused by the subplots in the backgroud. They took my mind away from the story. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. Keep writing, maybe give more explanations or clues for things that happen.
That was one of the best masturbation scenes I've read here.
A woman masturbating while relating her tale of masturbating at her office...Too cool
I hope you continue this at some time...
I do agree with the other comment, I was a little confused myself...but I liked it.
Keep going...