All Comments on 'Shit Happens Ch. 01'

by Georgepat

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
The sex was hot, but...

... I was confused by the subplots in the backgroud. They took my mind away from the story. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. Keep writing, maybe give more explanations or clues for things that happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
What a masturbation scene!!

That was one of the best masturbation scenes I've read here.

A woman masturbating while relating her tale of masturbating at her office...Too cool

I hope you continue this at some time...

I do agree with the other comment, I was a little confused myself...but I liked it.

Keep going...

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