by pat_7223
I love the physical transformation to total cock slut. It's what she's always wanted. Can't wait to see what's next.
I'm as into the shame kink as much as the next guy, and there are many hot points in this story. But I feel like its a bit too dark, mean spirited. And while other guys might be even more turned on by it because of this, I could only find myself disturbed by the other characters constant berating and abuse of Patty, especially with Derek starving , using, and leaving them. It just pushes past the point of kinky shaming for me and into the area of abuse. You're a very good writer, but I don't enjoy the constant beat down on the character we're supposed to be routing for. But if that's just what you're into I guess, go for it! Maybe it's just not my thing