All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 01: The Showcase'

This was sizzleing hot. I enjoyed Shona’s slow journey of realization. I really liked that Viv got a little too excited during the filming! Perhaps you will pursue that in the future, after we see what happens with Aly.

Very erotic and very arousing. Your descriptive skills made Shona's first lesbian encounter a very enjoyable and, dare I say, a very satisfying experience for me (blush). The way you ended the chapter screams out for a follow up, I sincerely hope so. Five stars.

toesucker1: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Sorry there was no foot sex in there for you, apart from a little to wiggle...🙂

AliceGee: Thanks. I'm glad you got a little satisfaction from it 😊

Your character-driven pieces of erotic fiction are so enjoyable. So impressed with the sexually charged women you create each uniquely intriguing/identifiable. Love how you introduced Seònaid/Shona to us including her “… getting myself off by watching me getting myself off.” And so glad you brought Aly back at the end. Looking forward to this series wherever you take us.

Migbird: Thanks. I'm happy that my characters resonate with you and yes, there will be more of Aly.

This is another well written story Lissy! Full of eroticism, lust and passion. I liked the way you described Shona's journey, from breaking up with her boyfriend to making porn videos. Did laugh, at the part of the story, when Viv had to shoot to the loo!

A brilliant ending and possibly the start of new series, perhaps?

CupidCupid: Thank you! Part 2 is already being written... 🙂

Absolutely beautiful! Loving, exciting, and thrilling, just a perfect chapter.

Aoife: Thank you very much. I consider that high praise, coming from you 😊

Got in such a hurry to read part 2, I forgot to give you 5 stars. This story is great! I can't wait to see what happens between Shona and Aly. Oh! God! Thank you.