All Comments on 'Shooter Girl Kimber: Pumping Iron'

Extremely well written, engaging and erotic! Well done!

Love that the story was unfolded organically, rather than explained by a third-party omniscient narrator. What I mean is that there was no pump priming as in “in this world futa orgasmic activity has become a huge sport, followed by millions”, etc, etc.

Hopefully you will do more in this series!

Again, well done!!

That was... uhm, inventive! This futinari thing has so many possibilities, and you definitely took a different approach! Well done.

~B