by Joeehartley
Very very erotic. And you've only just started the story. There is a lot more to tell and discover. Please keep going.
Several have asked for a part 2 to this story, so since I feel that an author must respond to his readers, I'll start work on part 2 of this as soon as my current project is completed.
Thanks for the feedback.
***That was fun the old dude and the young filly. With the husband's permission!!!!! Weird but still a good read. Thanks for sharing.
Enjoyed your story. Very well written and set at a good pace. Certainly something I would enjoy reading more of, so long as it doesn’t get raunchy but kept in good taste.
Keep writing.
Lovely stuff Joe x x x
Looking forward to reading part 2 now...with slightly sticky fingers LOL
There aren't many people that really get into the details of sexy clothes. Love what you did here. Thank you :).
Enjoyed your story. Very well written and set at a good pace. Certainly something I would enjoy reading more of, so long as it doesn’t get raunchy but kept in good taste.
Keep writing.
An other good follow up, bit more of a stroke read but well thought out and written.