by JohnMurray4173
I had Sofia Vergara in my minds eye as I read this. Made it much more enjoyable.
The maid part at the end was unnecessary.
Where is part two fucking the maid? Part 3 should be finding out both women are pregnant.
great start, do need a couple more chapters. maybe have his dad demote his stepmother down to the maid after she got pregnant. promote the vietnamese maid to the new stepmother that didn't get PG..
Oooo...okay, you get Five**5**Stars for this one...even as goofy and absurd as it is. Entertaining, it was!!
Ready for next part...I know it is about sister...as with other readers, I would like to read about the maid, and more with step mom!
Great idea John, well written story. Is an extra chapter coming including the maid while the stepmother remains stuck to the bench?