All Comments on 'Shortening His Sentence Ch. 02'

by SugarandSalt

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Pethair63Pethair635 months ago

Wow! Very nice, now anticipation for a third an main attraction ❤️

aglex59aglex595 months ago

Such a good story....and a third chapter is necessary, I want to know how Foster will enjoy being fucked by Desiree.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is beyond amazing and I need part 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Where is the next chapter???

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Damn I want an ending ,warden and foster need to end up in a relationship after he’s released!

Client8Client8over 3 years ago
Good story but not enuff ass action for me

The story line was entertaining but a bit too much forced oral for my liking. Needed more anal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

NEED CHAPTER 3!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Disappointed

You've blue balled us sugarandsalt im dissapointed

bigcowboy36bigcowboy36about 4 years ago

anothher part please this made me so hard

interdictrinterdictrover 4 years ago
MORE

More please, you cant stop there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Overdue conclusion

Hot. Like all you work. Fuel for the spank bank.

MasterdcMasterdcalmost 6 years ago
Great read

Need part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot!

Want MORE horny shemale SEX!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please

This is my favorite story on this website please keep making more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love

Would LOVE to be in his place !!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Chapter 3

I've read pretty much all your writing, and I love this series the most. Please do another chapter!

Ike_The_SpikeIke_The_Spikeover 9 years ago
love this series

I'd really love to see more in this series. If looks like a story that could have growth in the characters as well as a lot more hot sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
No climax

Please do chapter 3

uncomonnerduncomonnerdover 10 years ago
dont leave us hanging

this is a great story please please chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Could you write a brutal/rape part. It would probably eventually happen to him anyways

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Part 3?

I would love a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Part 3 please!

Are you ever going to continue this one, I've loved it so far and would really enjoy another perfect chapter.

shemalelover2013shemalelover2013about 11 years ago
Amazing!

Very nice, just as hot as Part 1, can't wait for the next part, hope it comes soon <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Porn King

You are such a creative writer, your stories really have us wanting more. You should do more about Kevin and Brenda ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
part 3

please write the next part soon really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story - hoping for a chapter 3!

This is my first time reading one of your stories - I'm hooked and will be watching for your posts from now on. Thanks for writing and hope you get a third chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great

Great story great writing great nut...Pt 3 please! Thank u in advance

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Excellent!!!!!!!!

Part 2 is great. The only problem is it wasn't 4 or 5 pages long. Can't wait for the next episode. S&S Good work!!!!

tim607tim607almost 12 years ago
Fantastic

Another great story! I look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
fuck

i came before brenda did thank you

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERalmost 12 years ago
Dam

Another great chapter, just love the whole scenerio, wish i was foster

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wooow

A great story continues - you write so well and they are people with issues and personalities - not just sex objects. But the scenario - well done looking foreward to part 3

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