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by JordanCedarwood

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BobNbobbiBobNbobbialmost 5 years ago
Getting dinner ready for Hubby

I hope he likes the special sauce.

Good job of storytelling, JC.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Are you also known as

JordanWormwood?

ctdansctdansalmost 5 years ago
very nice

Very nice and erotic. I am not into sharing so not my type of story but your characters where to me written well.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 5 years ago
You want to power-poon a submissive woman? Great! In front of her old man? Cool. Want to own her for a while and make her oblivious to him temporarily? Uh, OK, kind of comes with the territory. But feel the need to insult him verbally? You're a freaki

What stripe of wimp would fantasize about his wife talking crap about him?

Maybe for an encore the said loser can stroke to the idea of his demise?

I can sort of understand humiliation POV fetishes in regard to a third party dominant. It's a coping mechanism for unresolved feelings of worthlessness, helplessness, or relationship anxiety. But to get off on actually failing in the eyes of your spouse?

Get help?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I think we all know who really wants to experience that big lucious cock.

Why put an innocent woman in between you and your secret desires?

TatankaBillTatankaBillalmost 5 years ago
One of the best...

...very short stories I've read. Really sexy, really hot. Terrific job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
My wife

Very hot! Short and sweet. I want this guy to fuck my wife next!

screwherscrewheralmost 5 years ago
My wife

Reading this makes me think how I'd love to hand my wife over to a guy like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

Wish I were the husband. Would love to look into my wife's eyes as a strong, hung, dominant man pushed his cock inside her and watch her cum inches from my face. Fo the negative comments, you will never understand us cucks. I admit we are a weird breed, abhoration of nature. But it's who we are. You should be happy as you are probably the exact type of guy we want to fuck our wives. You should be happy, it means no strings attached pussy for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Slide back under the rock you came from you lame joke.

Piss poor and desgusting

seacoastcoupleseacoastcouplealmost 5 years ago
Short, sexy and to the point!

Thank you for sharing this quick little read. Lots of fun and 5 stars!

StoneyLodgeStoneyLodgealmost 5 years ago
Hot Story but....

It was too brief. I would have liked to read the background... what led up to this encounter...years of "pillow-talk" or whatever ... where they found the stud to initiate her....you get the idea. You might add a "prequel" to answer those questions along with more about the "morning after" or a sequel about how they felt and the next time(s).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Oldbearswitch

OBW:

“But feel the need to insult him verbally? You're a freaki” (presume that was meant to be freak or freaking loser).

Did you read a different story to me? I can’t find any verbal insulting. I can find several references to the husband looking happy and kissing his wife.

TomcattUKTomcattUKalmost 5 years ago
Not bad

Not bad for short erotica. Well constructed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Very hot story. The cuck , swinging, cheating, sharing or that poly type life isn’t for me at all and I truly feel some is a psychological patient in need of help. Fictional stories or movies are just that , for the imagination of the person reading or watching. I think a couple really in love could do everything that the person is doing with the lover and get even better results if they really love each other. It doesn’t really matter the body parts it’s mostly a mental thing. A bigger cock , tighter pussy ,bigger tits , open to anal or more fit any person could close there eyes and image anyone. That’s why like in this story she looking in her husbands eyes as some young arrogant punk fucks his wife as she submits to him . It doesn’t make sense to me but many are trying it. How many couples go to a Carribian Island or Vegas get drunk and come home with a marriage in ruins . I know a few and those are the ones who admit it. This guy told us how on his 30 th anniversary they went to Vegas. Had a great time than on last night went to a top less bar both hot lap dances and were drinking with a group of 8 all different ages with three couples having an awesome time . They went across to their room which was a giant suite they were all staying in . The guys all had viagra and extacy which everyone took . He said the next thing you knew everyone was fucking , switching, dping with anything goes but between the drugs which him or his wife never took and the heavy drinking they didn’t really know what was going on. It wasn’t until he opened his eyes with a girl sucking his dick done others passed out or fucking but his wife was loud and verbal than a guy put his dick in her mouth ass the younger single guy was pounding her ass all while talking to him like it was no big deal. When done he grabbed his wife both out of it with hang over and realizing what took place all night and trying to get out of there . The people were telling how frat it was and were happy they joined them and saying goodbye but the one guy who was around their age had pushed her shoulders down and had his wife blow the wife blow him while talking and she did it . They finally got out of there didn’t really talk packed up went to the airport and finally had the fight two days later. Marriage was in trouble and he couldn’t get passed what he saw that morning. They did get divorced two years later. He it wasn’t her fault but mentally couldn’t handle seeing her ass fucked by some 22 year old with a dick twice his size while another shot a load down her throat and than the guy making her blow him to finish and that guys wife was try to blow him but he refused. They didn’t know they were with a swing group, they were to wasted to realize

Ray RobertsRay Robertsalmost 5 years ago
Short & Sharp for sex session with a eager wife

Enjoyable read and there will be many who will concur with this experience for those that can't, just imagine your wife holding your knees and the smile you will see from both the wife & wanton Stud.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Yawn

Another faggotty husband for the defective males in the LW readership

Rogge76Rogge76about 4 years ago
Really good!

Hot, nice and loving! We both enjoyed this story a lot!

Roger & Anna

NaureenNaureenalmost 4 years ago
Lucky SHE

How lucky she is to have such a consenting husband ..... A dream for me to give myself away to a stranger while my husband watching me stroking himself

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
LUCKY COUPLE

I've tried and tried for ages to get my wife to add another gentleman...all I get is NO...lucky couple... great story

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

A whorewife always remembers the first time she makes her husband a cuck.

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