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Click here"I walked over and gave him a kiss. "Harold..., find yourself a good woman, no matter what her age. Make sure she has some fire and then teach each other what each of you wants from a sexual relationship, as well as one that is nurturing. I can promise you that is what I am doing and it is the greatest feeling in the world."
"Taking my hands, he kissed me, "Well.., if this is the last time I see you, and I feel very badly about that..., I'd like you to know that..., the memory, the one memory of these two nights that I've spent with you..., that will stick in my mind..., is the picture I have in my mind of you taking off your dress tonight. That picture..., of you in this room..., naked in front of me..., will be the last thing that I see in my mind..., at the moment that I die."
"Wow," I said to her, "that is some pretty heavy stuff. What will be your last thought?"
"That's easy," she said, "it will the very first time I saw you..., standing next to your granddaughter in my classroom."
I asked if she could possibly get away three Saturday nights in a row?
"No..., I'd love to, but we've got to pick Kim up at camp on Saturday. I can go out with you on Thursday though."
We made a date and kissed goodbye.
Driving back to work, I confessed to myself that..., while I figured that she'd have some sort of sexual experience with Harold..., I never thought she would fuck him. And thinking about that..., she hadn't mentioned his using any protection when they'd...? Did she go home after she left him and gone to bed with Harold's cum still...?
I couldn't wait until Thursday!
- COMMENTS
CyJmy69almost 7 years agoMurphtsurf I've read all 24 chapters of this real life saga, though it's quite unbelievable. I suppose the saying is true, reality is stranger than fiction. I was a bit disappointed with your writing in this 24th Chapter & some in the 23rd. Not at all up the standard your earlier Chapters were. For one I believe in Chapter 23 the woman's name was, if memory serves, Adrianna or something similar, but it was definitely NOT Mercedes. Also you kept jumping from 1st person to 3rd person in the telling of the story. When Elle was relaying the evenings festivities to her "husband" there were times you wrote "I said to her" but it was Harold and Elle that were in discussion. Also, I know autocorrect gets all of us OFTEN but there were many words written wrong such as think rather than thing. Just proofing the story well before submission would solve that problem. You are a very good story teller. Because of that my critique was a bit harsher. You wrote so well in earlier chapters and I want to read the rest of this "amazing" tale. I just want to read it when it's written as I know you are capable of writing. It's distracting when the wrong names are used, the words are incorrect or the narration is changed from 1st person to 3rd etc. I look forward to finding out how this tale progresses and where it ended up. Good luck on future chapters.
