All Comments on 'Show Pony'

A little tame compared to your other scenes, but well written, and descriptive of the emotions involved

Another beautiful story thank you.

A story of tenderness as well as D/s between two persons that love one another and share their kinky sides.

The addition of anxiety and how the relationship helps to manage those brought a wonderful realness to the piece.

Excellently written main characters with the "sub cast" and "extras" gone into sufficiently. Many would have bombarded the reader with descriptions of each of the other guests, taking asay from the main protagonists.

Well crafted, highly erotic, with a deep sense of reality.

I can differentiate between favourite and best.

As my kinks more align with your other stories, especially blasphemy and corruption, your nun story is my favourite.

To date, this is the best I have written of yours, and arguably the best I have read on this site.

I do not give false praise, so please take my comments for the compliments they are.