All Comments on 'Shower Story'

Thought the narrator was a female. I'm not into homosexuality.It's OK for those who like it button me.

Great story, good sex scene! Made me wish I was getting manhandled in a shower :p

I just have 2 notes:

1. You're switching between past and present tense several times, in future writing I'd suggest choosing one tense and sticking to it. (I havent yet read the other story you've written in 2022, so maybe you've already looked into that).

2. I would've added the dubious consent tag, because even though it ended well with both characters enjoying it and being pretty freaking adorable in the aftercare, it did start with Charlie being a tad forceful (the cnc tag (consensual non-consent) might've worked too, depending on how you felt about it).

Overall, enjoyable story with delicious sex, I hope to read more of your work! <3