All Comments on 'Showstopper Ch. 04'

You are a talented writer. Keep writing.

Of a mentaly ill woman, like the rest of your stories.

Thanks Npaul for the kind words!!...As for the Anon (as usual) comment....so by your reasoning any woman that actually enjoys a sexual situation is considered mentally ill?

Every woman I've ever known would take multiple orgasms over sanity any day of the week:)

I thought the one place I might find pretty happy, go lucky and open minded people would be at an adult fiction website..Honestly, its shocked and saddened me at the amount of people here that seem like someone pisses in their Captain Crunch every morning..(maybe..I'll just have to incorporate THAT into a story one of these days)

Stardog

the woman carachter. her transformation was just from a selfish asshole to a cheating selfish asshole and that is kind of not to much. nothing around her counts or is mentioned more than in one sentence. work, her family, friends (real friends). she also does not intend on working to change her partnership to a better one, no. it's all about her and her sexual needs and her own so called pride.

You don't need women like this. They are no good to anyone including themselves.

Really liked your story + was sorry to see it ended so soon.

Just got home from work and checked the feedback from the finale...

To everyone who enjoyed the series..my heartfelt gratitude...the next series is already in the works..

To the few who didn't (and made their objections known)....after trying to get over how initially incoherant those feedback posts seemed, I guess it finally dawned on me that I should take that as a compliment. If someone is going to be so distastefully affected by a work of fiction (let me say that again..a work of FICTION) that came straight out of my imagination, then I guess I didn't quite know my own power...especially since those same precious few folks keep saying they'll never read my stuff again yet with each new submission they somehow find their way back..

Great weekend everyone,

SC

From the first chapter, it was a "can't put it down" read. Fun characters, great writing and lots of wet, hot sex. As a gal who's enjoyed a somewhat less exciting love life than your main Showstopper, I loved losing myself in the fantasy. More! More1 More!!!