All Comments on 'Shy Boy Harem Pt. 03'

That was a nice one. Can't wait to see next part

The part where she humps his duck is great. Best typo ever.

Terrible writing. Nipples are never hard as diamonds. And if you think your cum is dirty then see a doctor, don’t put it in someone.

Loved the story!

So far so good maybe be careful of how many girls you add tho.

Enjoying the story . AAAAA++++

Lmao what the fuck is the other Anon talking about?

If he's working, he's not a NEET. It's used so much too.

Don't you just hate it when you go in to get a nice curry and a hot waitress fucks you like it's the last time she'll ever have sex and begs you to fill her up while mashing her huge tits in your face? It's so annoying. I came her to eat; not be sexually assaulted. Said no one, ever. :) The lil' guy needs to get more assertive though. A bit of confidence will go a long way.

I'm enjoying it quite a bit so far.

3*- too rushed no story. perhaps it would have been better if ipt3 & pt4 were combined.

Your book kind of sucks in all the ways most stories on here suck: bad grammar, repetition, boring “nice guy” MC that has very messy views of people that reveal he isn’t actually very nice and deserves to be alone, the weeb vocabulary is pathetic, and why oh why does every white author feel the need to use ‘exotic,’ or ‘spicy’ when they’re fucking a brown girl? It’s never been funny, it’s just stupid.