All Comments on 'Shy Boy Harem Pt. 06'

Great story, but I wish the chapters were longer though.

I'm trying to find the story in here. It's just a dude banging chick after chick. We learn hardly anything about the characters and why they do what they do.

Taste like light Kimchi? Come the fuck on lmao. plus the continuing to refer to her by her full name?

What's the menwritingwomen equivalent of white people writing Asians?

Lost your way in this series, from a simple premise, to racist rubbish.

Rather than get the harem together to tell the story you need to tell the story to get the harem together. It just seem a series of short stories ATM. We don’t know what the other girls are doing right now. Are they at work? Are they normal? Are they heading to his apartment free will or feel compelled? It’s just odd we know nothing at this point.

I think you have a good story going so far. The MC is still his shy self. You are starting to have him explore what is happening to him. From what I can see, the power he has acquired is opening up either strong desires the women did not know they had or desires they have suppressed. I will tell you, it is difficult to keep an innocent character innocent or good. Power eventually corrupts the author, if only to keep the story intriguing. Keep up the good work, I actively look forward to your next chapter.

It's surprising how quickly this has gone downhill. It started really, really great.

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Great story thus far and look forward to how it will continue. My only wish that these chapters were longer and more descriptive. I am curious about what the purple alien rock is affecting his body; I look forward to the test results from the Korean Scientist. On a different note, it would be great to have such a power at your fingertips...

Great read. Thank you for sharing your work. Looking forward to more!

More chapters please. Like it a lot. AAAAAA+++++

Love the story please keep it cumming

your work drives me wild, and i love it, cant wait for more

I think some of the comments make good points. There clearly seems to be some undertone about race going on? Every single women the MC has hd sex with isn't white, and that's been emphasised. Not that it's a major issue, it's just pretty obvious. I also can't stress enough to please not just let this turn into an extended wank story. While the sex scenes are important, and they've been pretty good so far, I really hope you don't lose sight of the plot and the potential it has

I consider erotica one long wank with a plot so this is tight up my alley. Cant wait for more.

Fucking hot

This series has developed into such a pleasure to read...and leaves me (us) panting in anticipation of the next chapter! Please, post (7) as soon as you can....

🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋

Oh, no. I'm all caught up! I need more.

Excellent story, keep it up...please post at the earliest...

Next? Needs some breeding

Discontinued? No update in 13months. Was just starting to build into exploration of powers. Pity. Also the involuntary obedience seems a VERY dangerous course to take, especially if he has superhuman strength etc.

More?

Great story so far please continue. Hopefully you post the next chapter soon.

Typical Lit writer... Build up the reader; then quit writing...

Wish you would have kept this one going!!

Since he has a variety of Babes next he needs a Blonde or Red headed Babe too fill out the harem.

I agree with the others. You started such a nice story but then leave it after only 6 chapters ??

Where is the rest of the story

So, after chapter 6 - where does this go???

Our hero is getting tested, but what are the results of the tests???

And then what are you going to do with him??

It has been a year and a half - you must have thought of something.

Inquiring readers minds want to know what.

When you are hoping for that thread necromancy