All Comments on 'Shy Cam Girl'

You could do with some help from an editor. Lots of run on sentences and grammatical issues that make it a bit of a challenge to read.

The concept was neat though. Maybe you could have dwelled on some story beats a bit.

First story of yours i've read, sexy and well written with a nice flow

Would love to see my wife doing something like that. She is was one heck of an exhibitionist in our younger days. She even topless danced for 6 weeks once so she could undress and table table dance for other men while I watched. Your story was a great read. Doesn't matter if it is/was true or fiction.

Nice idea, well executed. You write well and the story flows at the right pace. Pity about the typos (vibrater I understand, but where did toke come from?). Using Word or Google Docs will get most of them, and Grammarly or an editor would find the rest. Thanks.

More please.

So good and engaging, thank you

Next chapter please. Really loved this.

A well written story, enjoyed reading it and hopefully there will be follow ups. Can oversee the type errors as the story is very enjoyable

I love stories about shy girls getting to discover their sexual side, and especially an exhibitionist streak! Thank you...made me cum so hard!

I have seen my older sister, at times my married older sister would join her. They used to chat on hottest chat site where both the parties chatted on their cams. Both my sisters would not hesitate in taking off their bra, keeping faces away from the cam. If they are with someone who they have met in person, then panties will also be tossed on floor. With regulars, they preferred to yalk dirty in desi hindi Dheeraj Gujarathi

An odd mixture of fact and fantasy. I know someone who recently became a cam girl and many of the details are accurate (allowing for differences between sites). However, the amount of money earned is a vast exaggeration, especially for a newcomer. Despite that, I'll be reading part 2!