All Comments on 'Shy Ella and Her Big Fuckin Titties Ch. 03'

I liked jack more 😂❤️

You're writing my favorite (non Fantasy setting) busty stories right now. Please keep them coming. Love the adventures this chapter.

I was really enjoying this story & liked Ella, but I couldn’t even finish it!! I can’t believe how stupid you had her be!! Shame that you ruined a good story!!

I liked Ella with Jack!! I don’t like what you did to her in this chapter. Disappointed 😞

I like stories about stupid girls personally. I was surprised to see she was a Bimbo though, I thought she was just shy.

Also found this chapter disappointing as nobody is that naive. Why bother giving her any thoughts at all when she just acquiesces to every imposition. Feel it would have been better for her to be at least a little complicit in her exposures like being rewarded in some way, even if it was just larger tips. On the other hand larger tits I'm just fine with ;)

You have been writing a great story......but please don't ruin it now....

You responded to my comments for episode 3 by saying suggestions were welcome. Well you asked for it .....lol.

1. Please keep Ella and Jack as a couple. The chemistry between these two is explosive. I dont mean marriage or anything that serious necessarily, but PLEASE keep them together.

2. If you want tp "spice" things up how about Jack marries Cristi for appearances sake and keeps sleeping with Ella. Then Ella gets pregnant.....hmmmm now what?

Just saying. You are a very good writer, I believe you could write an amazing story.

Some people like a girl with big tits to be fooled into being touched. Loved the dish washing part

so title states SHY not stupid!! You ruined a good story by making her an idiot & total moron!! I liked the story with her & Jake. Why did you have to ruin it??

Great new chapter..was getting bored by the vanilla sex between Jake and Ella. Dont listen to these anonymous idiots and keep em new chapters in a similar vein coming!!

With complete honesty I'd like to thank the responders for their feedback thus far. Looking back this chapter might have done better with a separate character/story. I don't mean to be making excuses for myself but this fact might help explain, in every scenario I come up with the girl looks the same, and these are only the ones I've managed to put into words. I do have an "ending" in mind for Ella and Jack but I've been trying for some filler. As a brand new writer I am not entirely regretting this chapter but admitting it could have been a separate story, taking the feedback seriously, and hoping for inspiration for a little filler because I don't want this story to end too soon. Thanks again and please do continue.

Maybe you can write in the next chapter that this chapter was just a bad dream that Ella had & move from it. I have to say it really didn't make sense to make her that stupid, especially since in previous chapters she wasn't. I really would like to just see her & Jack together there is so much you can do with them & have them sneaking around behind Cristi"s back.

AMAZING! I personally loved the new twist in this story!!! In my opinion you're currently producing the best material in this category.

And while I agree that it was a bit of a break from the previous chapters I'm really hoping you'll write more stories like this! Like, when does Mario finally get to have his way with her? ;-) You could always start a new series too... I guess that would keep everyone happy

I enjoyed the chapter. I also think you made a great observation about it probably being better as a separate story. You're new, are already a GREAT AUTHOR and you're only going to get better as you welcome your own potential mistakes and respectful reader feedback. Good luck to your future.

i actually enjoyed this departure from the other chapters because my expectation was that at the end of this, jack would find out about the situation that she was in and fight for her in some way because of his possessiveness, which i thought would be extremely sexy of him lol. i’d love to see the story go in that type of direction, where this chapter becomes a way for them to get closer

I've masturbated for the duration of the entire story. I can't explain why I get so excited when a woman with huge tits is so naive and used by horny men. I could imagine the actress in so many different stories, the suspense was so great. Thank you so much.

You're my favorite new author right now, can't wait for your next story addition or new Ella chapter. Any ETA?

Thank you! I have a skeleton of a fourth chapter started but still have a few holes to fill, really would like to plump it up if it's the final. I also have a few ideas for other stories with similar girls, just been busy. Thank you all for the feedback!

Oh, the nature of these comments other readers left is…peculiar. It’s like escaped Twilight fangirls found their way to your story. I really wouldn’t give two thoughts about this obsessive “shiping” response, and premature unhinged attachment to characters. Remember that this is not the majority, most people don’t comment anything at all (I had never read the comment section before). I think these are also people that don’t share the kink that you are portraying, the going along with things through inertia, not wanting to be a bother, and, yes, shyness. Came twice, hope you continue writing it. Tom

Ella needs the go back to work

Awesome!! Love how naive she remains no matter what happens. Excited for the next chapter.

Don't leave us hanging bro

will be continued?

next part?

Need another chapter, please!! Love how naive she remains. Can you add some more of her thoughts.

So good...this story has made me come so many times...thank you!

This had Karyn’s Prison vibes all over it, loved it! Hope you come back to it!

Loved it, hope to read more!!