by S_A_River
An excellent begining, and intriguing characters. Looking forward to seeing how it develops. Highly arousing.
your story is about unwanted sex--that is called rape, and shows no respect or love toward the wife.
I have a beautiful,busty 31 yr old wife and I arrange for men of all ages to come to our house and fuck her silly.She is always reluctant at first,particularly with fat,older men,but I cannot help but find it totally erotic seeing my wife used and abused as a sex plaything!By now Sheridan is used to strangers and I think she rather enjoys the fuckings she is given!
Loved this first instalment - can't wait to read more of Rachel's adventures. I'd love to know more about her in the next one (description etc). She's a very intriguing and believable character.
You set up the beginning nicely and provided some background on the characters.
I hope you continue writing and look forward to seeing how far the limits are that Rachel can be pushed to.
. . .It was a good introduction to the couple and the husband's fetish.
I hope you continue but change up the situation to make the sex scenes hotter and dirtier. Sam could get rougher, or film her, or even bring in a few friends. Obviously that is your choice as the author ;)
Ian could get in over his head and walk into a scenario that he wasn't expecting and lose control and Sam becomes the one in control.
Personally I think Sam was too gentle with her, she needs to be treated with a lot more aggression, hope part two brings friends to use her
And her reactions are quite believable....even if the scenario is sad. However, one of my girlfriends told me a story of how she was "coerced" into having sex with a guy she didn't want and she didn't get wet or aroused.
So either she did want it or she didn't but I find it difficult o believe that she truly didn't want to and still get aroused. You'll have to pick one.
I disagree with prior comment. I think it was well done and wish you would continue. Suggestion: Same scenario but have a few of Sam's friends show up unexpectedly
Pretty much a sad and sick story. Don’t lose your day job.