by BigK7o8
Love the series! Personally I'd love to see Iris get turned out for a bit and knocked up, but eventually be "rescued" by the frat and fucked skinny!
I'm hoping for a combination of both. And I'd love to see Opal and Jack get closer during the mission. Thank you so much for continuing this story.
I'd love to see iris rescued, tri pi have been a part of the story since the beginning. I've grown used to them as characters. I think the best chapter so far has been chapter 4, I'm not sure why I think it's because that's when iris finally broke and accepted everything, I know that's impossible to replicate as it can only happen once but perhaps some similar scenario to halloween where iris runs back to Jack and begs him to take her back. Also I really love any dialogue by iris, anytime she degrades herself or moo's is amazing, I don't write a lot of prose so I don't know how difficult it is to switch from the highly descriptive internal dialogue of her thoughts to a more vocal exposition but more dialogue would be great. Finally, and this is more of a personal thing really, I'm not into big women, classic iris with a skinny frame and huge ass is a winner for me.
I love this story and have been a fan since chapter 1. I would like to see her get rescued by TriPi and "fucked thin". Don't get me wrong this chapter was amazing, however, I'd rather see Iris as a thin/almost cartoonish figure with absolutely ridiculous proportions. I think Jack and Opal should do more together ;) and perhaps a big gangbang with Opal and Iris would be extremely hot!!! Series is a 10/10. Thank you
Yeah I’m for the tri pi saving iris and her going back to her usual THICC self. This level of self destruction almost killed the attraction to the series for me. Keep up all the humiliation and other stuff but if you can dail back the emphasis on the weight gain and pregnancy stuff that would be swell.
Gotta say, I’m thinking I’d rather see Iris non-knocked up and back to her usual cartoonishly slim thick self due to a rescue. This one was a bit extreme for my liking, been following since chapter one and I’m missing old Iris, though the ass continuing to grow is always appreciated.
Definitely a combination of both!!!! Have her impregnated in the next story, used up by Darryl's gang, sold then rescued and fucked skinny in the story after that! Loving the way they used big Iris in this story!!!
Holy shit, I have never come so many times to a story in my life. You hit ALL my buttons so hard that it’s insane. Been reading on this website for about 15 years but this if the first time I’ve EVER left a comment. I hope you understand how amazing this story is for me to do that.
I have a huge impregnation fetish, and I want to see Iris get knocked up and abused and gangbanged and pierced and tattooed while she’s pregnant. And holy shit, if she has a black baby that would actually hit probably every single category for me in one story. I wanna see her get pregnant and used, having her fat tits milked and filmed as a ton of black guys run a train on her. Afterwards, having her going back to her normal body size is fine, and I’m sure you can write that really well.
Also, ANYTIME nipples get pierced and bodies get tattooed against her will is one of the hottest things I’ve ever read. I cannot wait to read what amazing stuff you come up with!
I would like to see her get back to a more normal life with Jack and every negative influence dealt with in a more good-ending fashioned though she can still be a bit more whorish in the end. Just a bit dignifiable whorish if it makes sense.
I love the series though I’m not a gang bang person. Kind of miss Jack being the master in control of everything. since chapter 4 I’ve been very surprised with the story going more outlandish and would love a bit of a return to Iris’s usual self and a tad more of a happy existence for her and Opal
She should get Knocked up and then the Jocks at the school should feel really bad about it. Almost guilt tripping in a way.
Simply because most guys I know would've kept Iris and Opal a secret, just for themselves.
So if it was up to me, I'd have a two friend duo kinda save them from themselves at this point, just for the purpose of keeping the honey to all for them.
Make it a brother for Iris who loves super thick white women, and a titty crazed white Frat alumni for Opal, a bit older than Jack who doesn't approve of the direction he's been taking the fraternity in.
Imo it can't be Jack as he was the catalyst for their lives degradation.
Women get a return to a healthy normalcy, while also the habit of being fukked silly continues.
Just my feedback.
This is one of my favorite series on this site. I love the idea of Iris getting pregnant and even bigger everywhere, but I wasn't as much of a fan of the dirty gang here as much as I am of the fraternity. I'd like to see Iris go back to her frat ways and get knocked up there.
i love some depravity every once in a while but I'd love a happy ending. A happy ending with thicc/pregnant iris would be superb
Yeah this is level of self destruction is not doing it for me. Have her absolutely crave sex and go lust crazy, but not while destroying her body. I rather have iris not get pregnant and get "fucked slim" as they say.
Your story’s been a great, fun and an energetically depraved read so far but I have to be honest and say that chapter 7 didn’t do much for me. Having Iris go back to her average/thicc proportions would be great and having her and Opal having some sort of normalcy while getting fucked by the Tri Pi dudes and other guys on the side would make for a nice good ending imo.
I would like to see Iris get bigger and maybe pregnant. Look forward to the next chapter
I think it would be great to see Iris continue to get bigger from all this protein shakes. And then be rescued. Great work look forward to chapter 8
I prefer iris to be rescued but also humiliated in college and impregnated and return to her size not become so big
Hey bigk7o8, big fan. Not rushing you or bothering you, take all the time you need. Just wondering if there's a chance chapter 12 might drop in the next 2 weeks? It'd give me something to do while I'm in self isolation. Whatever the outcome man stay safe, wash your hands, stay indoors, maybe write a little haha. Thanks.
it's been near enough 9 months and the author said the next one would be out "soon" when he posted this. I think this series is dead :/