All Comments on 'Shy of the Moon'

by mrflex37

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ByrdMan1960ByrdMan1960over 4 years ago

Usually not into anal, but was a pretty hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This bothered me a bit

you mentioned that his girlfriend was Brazilian and then had her scream in Spanish, Brazilians speak Portuguese.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I enjoyed this alot.

Always down for tgirl tops.

especially surprises

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More!

There were a couple grammer things, but overall it was a great read. Keep it up! Maybe they could accidentally see each other at a bar or something?

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
very hot

Thank you, this was a very good story I really enjoyed it. Serves him right for trying to coerce her into being assaulted. He should have had more morals than to try that with anyone, whether a girl or a weaker guy. Maybe this was a learning exercise for him and he may have matured a step or two and found a new level of respect for all others. Love the sensuality in the minutes they shared. I would expect he may look her up to give an apology and ask for future dates. Hopefully, Tiffany

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Could have been a longer story.

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Hi, I’m Flex. I’m an African American man writing about fantasies and ideas that I find interesting. I’m into a little bit of everything. The goal is to venture from solely writing Trans/Crossdresser stories. Like I said, I’m into a little of everything. Update: 3/31/21 C...