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"That's a terrible idea. We don't have the right setup for it, and we'd still have to somehow hide what we were up to from said secretary."
"Oh yeah. Guess that doesn't work."
Silas toyed with Faith's hair. She nuzzled back against his shoulder.
"We just can't tell anyone we're brother and sister," Silas said. "That's all."
"Mmhm. 'Cause we are definitely gonna get caught more."
"We are super bad at being sneaky."
Faith nodded. "Super bad at it. First time at the office, already caught." She chewed her lip. "Where did we land on being psychic detectives?"
Silas sighed. "We're not rebranding, Fai."
"Oh." She shrugged. "Oh well. No Sibling Psychic Detectives for us, then."
"Especially since we're not even really detectives. We're-"
"Investigators. I know. A girl can dream."
Faith rested her head on Silas's chest. She would have quite happily gone to sleep on him.
"Hey, Fai?"
"Yeah?"
"Want to fuck some more?"
Faith grinned. "Like you even have to ask."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoYou're a great writer, but you really dropped the ball with this one. Somewhere on page six you just went back to your same old schlock. I agree with another commenter that the way to Faith should have been through Aggie. Possessing Faith, and making love with Aggie, could have been incredibly HOT when told by a writer of your caliber. Instead you settled for a mediocre tale that came across as, well... MEDIOCRE! I'm so disappointed in fact, I'm going to give you the best unsolicited advice I can. Take this story down and rewrite it. Drop the arm, leave the "secret" eye, throw in a demon at the old lady's house that terrifies Aggie, and get Aggie/Faith into bed with Silas that way. I'd write the damn thing properly myself, except I don't have anywhere near your talent. The last four pages of this story was a textbook example of how to ruin a promising tale. With a writer as talented as you, that's an incredible let down.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGood story. I wish there would've been more of Aggie. I honestly thought the sibcest was gonna start because Aggie would decide to possess Faith and get fucked. Incorporating her into the sex through possession somehow would've been perfect. Gave it 5 ⭐️
pickup_man_1971about 1 year agoGreat story. Kinda wished it was explained why he could see Aggie and she couldn't. If they both could see her it could have been explained as them both being slightly sensitive to paranormal because they were related.
