All Comments on 'Sibling Rivalry'

This is great, cant wait for part 2

Outshined??? the proper word is outshone, please get a proper editor.

Awesome and hot, can’t wait for part 2

Why do people who don't really know English pretend like they do? Outshined and outshone are both proper English words. Why not consult a dictionary before pretending to know better than one?

yeah, wiktionary says both outshined and outshone are equally acceptable. people who make mean comments don't have valid points as much as a lack of therapy, don't listen to them. i hope you write more, this is an exciting start!

More please!

Interesting premise, but the absolutely ridiculous sizes in this story make it difficult to enjoy.

Can we get confirmation on if there's going to be a continuation? I absolutely love this premise and want to read more!