All Comments on 'Siblings Kinky Weekend Pt. 01-02'

Keep this story going

Great Story hoping for more wit more detail

Absolutely magnificent! Very well written and very erotic. I only gave it 5 stars because there was no 10 stars

If this is a first attempt, it's a DAMN good one... eagerly awaiting the rest of the story.

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amazing story

Looking forward to your next story

Great start especially for your first story. I hope you keep going and Jackie gets a pussy full of cum to really set her off.

Keep it going mate, excellent so far!!! 5/5

Trash!! Vraiment trash hhummmmm merci beaucoup!! Il y a tout, hésitation., amour, franchise puis l'acte!! Bon incest sibling ++++ please chapitre 2 3 4 5 6 ect...

Love it! I hope there's more watersports and anal play in the next one.

An excellent first story. Thank you. 🍆🍑

Excellent story, you did such a good job. Keep it going for sure.

Awesome! thx for that :) Maybe she liked to get her feet sucked, too? :P

I hate to be a nit picking pain in your ass, but...quoting you:

"and on his way up she felt his rock hard dick slide easily into her awaiting womb"

Only a prepubescent teenager would incorrectly substitute womb for vagina or pussy. 🤔 The uterus is the womb. Womb is NOT a synonym for cunt, vagina, etc.

That mistake combined with other errors led me to a vote of three points. But since this was your first effort, I'll throw in a little extra for encouragement. Do better next time even though this wasn't a bad try. 4/5

I would love to see i. Later chapters the role reversed and Jackie pick up a strap-on and duck her brother

Wow!

O! Just so perfect.

If she is 5 feet tall, and he is a foot taller than her. Care to explain how his dick brushed her ass in the hallway? With that height difference, he'd be brushing her lower back. Why didn't you just say she was 5'8"?