All Comments on 'Sickster (fun version)'

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TransguycharlieTransguycharlieabout 1 year ago

I’m about to cum, this was so good. I wish I was Marcus, he’s a lucky guy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I felt sorry for the sister though.

enmividalocaenmividalocaabout 1 year ago

It's started great but just escalated too quickly. Slow and steady.

SirKevinSirKevinabout 1 year ago

I made it to sister's mouth, saving the rest for later. Excellent story, great characters and descriptions.

DM me if you'd like a proofreader/editor for future chapters. Thanks for a lovely ride.

malloystermalloysterabout 1 year ago

I am so impressed with this story. Actually, I was dreading the ending because I thought that Thalia was going to die...

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