All Comments on 'Sierra's First Time'

For instance, check the meanings of 'waist' and 'waste'!

Many spelling and usage errors! Set and sit for example.

I don't know why people are so obsessive about grammar on here. This story was hot!

great story- I like that you cut to the action quickly but still set the scene well.

also the vasectomy as a plot device to alleviate questions of pregnancy etc .great idea.

spelling is an easy fix

Rick was fucking her slowly as he got deeper and deeper. Rick leaned down on her. "Get ready." Rick pushed in deep. Tearing her hymen. Hate to tell you but the hymen is at the very front of her you can't put in a more than a inch or so to break the hymen. Please learn the facts you are not the first to think is far inside her but is not makes you sound like it was your first time not hers

There were A LOT of spelling and grammar mistakes!

Put on inside her the little slut

Sorry, there were so many wrong words (waist instead of waste, your instead of you're) I had to stop reading. Grammarly might help you make corrections to this story or might help you avoid errors on your next submission.

Through ...threw

Waist....waste

Set...sit

Your..you're

These words are not interchangeable.

You need a proofreader.

Don't write about it if you don't know where it is. The rest of the story wasn't up to much either, rather juvenile.

I liked the story. The grammar nazi's can fuck themselves.