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HectorBidonHectorBidonalmost 5 years ago
Well done.

A very enjoyable super-hero adventure. The action scenes are terrific, really delivering the rockem-sockem comic-book feel, The cutting back and forth between the good guys and the bad guys was also really effective in moving the story along. Thanks.

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I am a hobbyist writer slowly working my way through all of the story categories. I am trying different genres, different settings and different time periods. Constructive feedback always welcome.