All Comments on 'Silent Legacy'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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Good start. Hope there’s more and she does him.

bananashake1997bananashake1997about 5 years ago
Need more active sex after so much love

Nice plot but i was expect in more , sexy definitely her bigger cock and women from brazil dont shave so it would have been more erotic if she was harier than him.anyway nice effort if its your first.

EmirusEmirusabout 5 years ago

A different take on the Brazilian ts story. It could have flowed better and some parts were cut short and could have benefitted from more detail. I don’t mean the sex. If you are planning a sequel, and you certainly could follow it up, you’ve made a mistake not giving her a bigger cock. Not the ‘huge and as thick as a coke can’ variety but bigger than she has at present. It limits the possibilities of them sharing the topping in different ways.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Brazilians don't have that kind of names

That's no a name we usually have, you know?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Actually, it's on the names list

Check this list of Brazilian female names out. You'll see that Salbatora is right there under "S".

https://www.brazil101.com/brazilian-baby-girls-names-mz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Mild rather than wild

Brazilian tgirls are usually more aggressive and wilder than in your story. More hardcore sex would have been most appreciated. Not bad, though! Keep writing

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