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All Comments on 'Silvertree Chronicles Bk. 01 Ch. 20'

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kyotie913kyotie913almost 4 years ago
Great work

Very enjoyable story. Another well written chapter.

bitbucket1bitbucket1almost 4 years ago
Too much retelling

Love the story but finding myself skipping the retelling of tales. See,s Eldar wants to tell people what he.s planning hThem do it then tell the story at least 3 or 4 times and it’s getting really repetitive. SA,e for the erotic scene. Giving instructions the doing then talking about it is super repetitive.

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But it’s a good storyand good characters so I’ve stuck with it

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May 25th, 2022 -- The Astra storyline has been updated from the original dated 3 years ago. It corrected hundreds of tense issues with some additional or changed dialog to fix some consistency issues. The Aurora story and books 2-12 of the Silvertree line will be coming over t...