All Comments on 'Joyce, Simon and Mackenzie Ch. 01'

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Rainyday493Rainyday4936 months ago

This is very, very promising. Keep the storyline going, please.

Spider1Spider16 months ago

Wow, this a great beginning. I love all three of these characters. So sensual and sex positive. I see wonderful, erotic things for them. I can't wait to read more. Bravo!

gooseman132gooseman1326 months ago

Was waiting for it to escalate to sex with all of them together

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A very nice read, can’t wait for the next part!

NesticNestic3 months ago

I really enjoyed your storyline. Please go on with further chapters …. Thanks for sharing.

CanadianEroticaCanadianErotica3 months agoAuthor

The second chapter was published earlier today.

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I used to have a profile on literotica.. but then I stopped writing for a long time. I'm back, and have started writing stories again which I hope to put here when they're done. Basically, this is going to be a place for all my taboo stories- not all my stories will be taboo,...