All Comments on 'Simon Pendleton Ch. 01'

This is a weak-ass story told about a guy. The lesbian sex was gratuitous, and not really a part of the story about Simon. It was just there for no rhyme or reason. This story is about a guy and his relocation, not about a girl who is a bisexual or lesbian who is doing something interesting.

The character development is good. Plot/subplots are starting to develop in a logical manner with the beginings of successful intertwining. The foundation for a entertaining series has been laid. Hopefully the author can continue in this outstanding manner. Likewise, the author knows how to use the English language. He employs "gutter slang" only as appropriate and in believable, everyday conversation between highschool/college aged adults.