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Click here"Did you decide on what you want next round?" I asked my mother when we got up.
She blushed. "Given how your sister was eagerly licking your cum out of my ass, I think that I want a taste of it as well."
"You got it," I told her and gave her a kiss. Wake me up with a blowjob in the morning, I thought at her as she and my father headed to their room.
None of us really wanted to sleep alone, so my sisters and I all made our way back to Tiffany's room. It wasn't long before we were all asleep, cuddled together.
- COMMENTS
NoobLegend67almost 3 years agoI actually loved the story up till the point the father joined in, I'm not one for sharing a harem, no matter how hypocritical that sounds.
10Benderabout 3 years agoEdit edit edit. Edit again. I get it. Writing is tough. And you take a load of shit for small mistakes. But most of that can be mitigated by editing ruthlessly. And a bit of research. Good fiction has a healthy portion of truth. If you are going to use electricity as a tool to move your story along, you should probably understand it more than your story indicates. Without going into a huge lesson on it, here in America most household circuits, lights, switches, outlets, run on 110 volt 15 amp circuits controlled by a circuit breaker. The air conditioning runs on a 220 volt 30 or 50 amp circuit with breaker. AND NEVER THE TWAIN SHALL MEET. There is a physical disconnect between the two. Other than an excuse to ogle the girls there was no reason that the ac couldn't have been running the entire time. And 110 volts is enough to startle you, I know from experience, it isn't enough to knock you on your ass, unconscious.
My point is not to tear your story apart, because you've put the effort in to write it, which is more than 99.999% of people here. My point is that if you are going to use electricity you have to remember that it is predictable and moves and behaves according to known parameters and laws. And you'll always have some asshole like me who reads this and says bullshit, not possible. But will accept the whole mind control part with no problems.
Keep writing hope this was constructive.
zena99about 3 years agoStart to finish, this was great. I loved that his sisters enjoyed drinking his piss. Forget those that did not like the watersports. All in all.....a great story.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoAwesome story. Write your story as you want to. But I'd say keep the stories the way they are, watersports and all. You have a warning at the start so if people don't like it they can read something else. Keep up the good work.
