All Comments on 'Simons Story - The New Guy'

This is really refreshing to see Simon come out of his shell even if just a short while before college. This is an equal relationship except for little planning and yet they seem good for each other. I hope you can continue to develop both the characters and the plot as they graduate and hopefully go to the same college!

Thanks for the feedback Exluke1. I’ll see what I can do.

Got to agree with Ezluke1 that you’ve laid a great foundation with this piece that could be built upon. That said this sweet, sexy standalone story is a glimpse into the lives of these guys and that’s good enough.

This had two great characters and was well written, but the humor in this is what made this story. Great job!

Great story my kind hope. More to come

Love it hope to develop more

I always love a happy love story and this one didn’t disappoint. Excellent writing, thank you.

I was curious, where were his parents while they were making all that noise?

Very sensual, very erotic! Great build up and climax! XOXO

Thanks for feedback as ever, I guess I pretty much have to continue the story now lol. I’ll see what I can do.

Loved this story, look forward to reading more from you..

Loved it. Romance stories savoured with some slow burn emotion and leading to some sex delight my intellect. Such a shame if you don't continue writing about these two.

I’ve just submitted a short interlude story to tidy you over while I get to work on a proper full length part 2. It will be live in the next couple of days. Keep a look out for ‘Simon’s Story - Interlude’. I hope you enjoy.

Thank you Secretauthor for continuing their story! I have a eye out for it.