All Comments on 'Simple Twist of Fate'

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YourLittleAngelleYourLittleAngelleover 15 years ago
I Don't Know Which was Better...

The beginning with our fair heroine bound, gagged, and caned, or the rest my imagination filled in as she talks with the detective.

You could go a long way with this one. It has a good start and lots of potential. Imagine if she got a taste for what she'd done... *shiver*

Thank you. ^_^

angelx602angelx602almost 15 years ago
The Ending....

I loved the ending! I was really hoping she was gonna get away somehow and when she did, she so let him have it. Ha! Loved it.

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
Twist of fate

Its obvious why it had to be done. Should I add more or leave my response at that? OK more it is.

I'd be crazy to give you a chance at revenge

I'm not going to live looking over my shoulder

It dosent seem like I'm your first

I'm probably not going to be your last

Well I decided you are.*~*,

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Hmmm, different

"not guilty" as far as I'm concerned. He got what he deserved.

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