by Baztrachian
She’s not entirely blameless, but he plied her with alcohol. That’s about as creepy as it gets.
Absolutely zero dialogue prior to the sex scene, no character building whatsoever... just awful. The basic premise could have worked well, but it needed a lot more scene setting and conversation to make it work. As it is, this is about as erotic as a medical examination.
Pretty much how I got my girlfriend (now wife) pregnant, but without the alcohol. Good story. Those things happen, and good things often come of it. We now have several grandchildren and wouldn't have changed anything that brought them to us.