All Comments on 'Sinful Beauty Ch. 02'

Who's Dale? Not sure if you meant Benson or Alan.

Sorry. This character slipped in from another story and was missed in my editing. My apologies for the slip-up as it does detract from the storyline. I will make the change but expect it will not make it into this story over the short-term.

Rachel

Small steps lead to intercourse

Inch by inch, young lovers battle their hormones, parents' opinion, moral teachings, and even their religions to achieve the ultimate pleasure of mating. What you've written is more or less the ideal situation between two lovers. Most young people aren't introduced to intercourse in such a loving and idyllic way.

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

This is such a wonderful sweet story of discovering love with a lovely man.

Well done. 5 stars.

Is there more to come?

And the story rolls on. It's been a number of years but your story triggers many fond memories from long ago. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Cheers

SAGE