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by SpellcasterBeru

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Pearl76Pearl76about 3 years ago

You’ve got some plot holes in the story that could use cleaning up, but otherwise, good.

SpellcasterBeruSpellcasterBeruabout 3 years agoAuthor

Yea I know theres plot holes, I am working on making this story better and longer,

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