All Comments on 'Sins of Our Fathers Ch. 01'

Like you, I love a solid story behind the smut and certainly with a healthy dose of non con. Great start and I just get the feeling this is going to be a cracker. The right mix of assholes and reluctant players with Gavin Chase and Logan.

Well done.

Don’t be too long before the next chapter please.

The writing is top notch and the build up is very hot. Please dont abandon the story mid way. Do finish it. Love the writing !!

The story is incredible. Almost reads like a crime novel. I love it. Cant wait until the next chapter releases.

Thanks for the feedback all! Love to hear your comments (good and bad :) )

I can already tell this is going to break my heart for poor little Riley. What a great start. Me thinks this ain't yer first rodeo! Superb storytelling. Bet there'll be some great twists and turns. I'm all in.

This "Logan" reminds me of Logan Paul. His habitual confidence reminds me of Logan Paul's mannerisms. Also, his first name is "Logan," so of course, I have to conjoin it to Logan Paul. It's fun imagining the story but with an actual character that I can imagine distinctly.