All Comments on 'Sirocco'

that was beautiful, thankyou

So romantic and sweet!

a lovely story! I don't usually go for the beauty and the beast thing...but this was very nice

will be mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread in the Authour's Hangout.

beautiful. A lovely romantic story, thanks for the read.

wow this is a great story! i hope you plan on continuing yo build on it or have other stories involving these two lovers!

This was a wonderful story. Dark and enthralling. Will you write the story of Kahlil's parents?

Very sexy and captivating. Good description. Every sentence was skillfully delivered. Emotions aplenty.

Very different too. Not your usual tall dark and handsome male lead.

All in all it was a remarkable story that captured the imagination and attention.

Well written and entertaining opening thw ay to endles sequels. I hope there will be many,

beautifully written. would luv 2 see these characters and their story expanded

Loved the detail of the story, and the way it's told - from the characters themselves to the way their feelings and desires and backstory are all made to work without stepping out of the flow.<br><br>

One minor point, though - in "a little more of his fear and loneliness was burned away", is it supposed to be "his"? The rest of that paragraph was told from Saira's point of view; it could be read as either her reading Kahlil's feelings, or a change of perspective to describe how he feels about it. The text doesn't really make that clear. <br><br>

That said... More. Please. Their parents, their past, their future, whatever your muse drops by with. ;)

i was hooked, i had to know what was going on. Your descriptions and emotions. I wish I could write like you with such fluidity. Now i'm going to check out your other works...

This had to be one of the best stories that I have read.

Every once in awhile i'll find a good one and this is one of them...

I thank you for a great story...

It's so sweet

I love short stories like this!!! It is sweet. What does Sirocco mean though?

This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It is so sweet. I love it.

This is my favorite story on literotica

This story had me captivated. I'm not sure how a dragon could loose to a mortal man but it was still a great story. A little more description of the love making would have been nice.