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This is a great story. Can't believe that I'm the first commenter. Obvious question: how can she be more real? I hope you're going to write more and show us, especially after all those allusions. Keep it up! :)

Can't believe I'm the first commenter. This is a great story. Obvious question: how can she become more real? I hope you're going to write more and show us after all those allusions. Good work. Keep it up!