by TrampsAnThieves
I love this story and it keeps getting better and better. I hope you have another dozen chapters or more planned.
I know that I must sound like a broken record but once again these submissions are well worth reading. I look forward to reading every submission and can hardly wait for the next one.
I am mostly skipping the sex scenes but enjoying the rest. I hope Mary turns out to be some pirate queen messing with them.
Great story. The only thing that didn't seem to fit was Mary. She would be badly traumatized after being in captivity for so long.
I second the comment from Anonymous, but everyone is different. It's what's going on with the MC and his apparent magic healing powers......what's up with that? Dont know how many chapters your going to do of this, but great so far!!!
Other than Mary skipping past any trauma recovery time, this story is excellent. It's reasonable she'd want to stay with her saviors,but jumping in to sex with them that first night tests the willing suspension of disbelief.