by TrampsAnThieves
5/5
What a lucky bastard!
Loved this - Shiva is great. Si, is pretty awesome, too!
Thank you, TnT!
Loved it!! Awesome ending as well, was so glad Shiva got motherhood.
Si is gonna be a busy man!
Really good story and you better get the kids involved in their own adventures. This part of the galaxy is sure getting interesting.
Great ending, If possible could you do a kind of next chapter to this story? just a suggestion. I really did enjoy it.
I love this story! But it felt like you were rushed trying to put in everything in only 5 chapters. This storyline had another good 5-10 chapters in it before moving on to the children. Examples : 1. Rescuing sex slaves (Genia's people) 2. Fighting more pirates 3. Working salvages for Sed station 4. Saving people and as ships. 5. Finding out why he can heal. You left so much storyline on the table unexplored. Maybe you should go back to readdress your story while it is still fresh in your mind.
Great story, nice to have a finish. But the ending does feel rushed. Seems there could be another chapter or 2 to the story.
BoooRha ! Well done loved it all !
Thanks for the read !
txcracker
Sure gonna miss this series. Surely you could think up a couple more chapters.
That was a great story we need more like that one on here thanks for the great work