by RickyRooster
Too much "you..." this and "you..." that. Make it a story. Good content tho just loses with you telling a Mistress what She is to do.
For the feedback. And I take your point. The 'story' is a collection of e-mails to a lady friend tellingher how I anticipate our eventual meeting will take place and what will then happen. I agree, though, that if she is to be the mistress I shouldn't really be directing. This is/was a departure from my usual style. Lesson learned. Thank you for your constructive critique.
Ricky.
i looking for a MASTER and a MISTRESS to keep me as their sissy maid all the time and to tieme up and put a drity things in my mouth to gag me and blindfold me to and rent me out to theu can make monry off of me to