by Riley_Rhinethaler
I love the story. Well written and wonderful plot and creativity. I normally wouldn’t point out something like this but since you seem genuinely concerned about typos etc. I figured I would. Unless my memory is wrong, when she went to her master‘s house the second time she took an Uber. Yet when she left her car was outside. 😄
Riley isn't very smart. First he puts himself in positions to be caught, then ignores his blackmailers. I would think he would have to be smart to be in finances, but doesn't have common sense. You can cut fabric and leatther, so the first thing to come off would be the clothes and shoes locked on and fuck all this, allowing yourself to be videoed. He just throws his life at predators.
Hi Anonymous! Thank you for the love!
Riley drove over to her Master’s house the first night and then he took her back to her home in his car. I can see how that is confusing. I will clear that up in the rewrite!
Thank you 😘
I've read all 3 chapters and really enjoyed each. You are a very talented writer and I'm looking forward to reading the next instalment.
Keep up the great work Riley x x