All Comments on 'Sissy Son'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

amazing. hope there is more

venus_canvenus_canover 1 year ago

Nice premise and a lot of “good” words but they seemed to be sprinkled all over. I almost wondered if it was written by an AI :) Sorry for the brutal comments but there is potential. I sincerely hope you can work with an editor to make this better.

Venus

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Seems to have been written by two authors?

Mid stream the typos pop up and context variants appear. Then, about two thirds through the text returns to similar to the initial portion.

Anyway, fun romp due to strange circumstances.

Not especially stimulating unless the reader is bent that way.

Good try . . . You will get better.

rdoolittlerdoolittleover 1 year ago
Story of the day

Nailed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When is the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Did not care for this story a mother does not rape her son!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent story, only criticism would be it could have used some build up in the beginning, cant wait to see more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Next chapter please, this sissy needs more. 💕 4yourpleasureiam

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