All Comments on 'Sister'

How old are Peter and Sarah? I imagine young Peter is a well-built, muscular masculine guy -- give him a splash of sexy chest hair for that gorgeous body. That will make their sex really sensual!

No tags mean no read.

I thought it was a good story.

Any follow-up planned?

Had me hard.

Filling in the blanks will only make this story better. Don't take criticism personally, learn as you go and find an editor and advisor to help along the way. Great premise to the story. Good Luck

Would have skipped it if it had a Rape tag, but because it was what she wanted, I guess it wasn't too bad. Just not a go to for me. Not a bad read though.

Just for information purposes, I did not read the story and here is why. I look for the stories that pertain to my interest. Therefore, tags are important to me. If a story does not have tags, or the tags I am looking for, I do not read them. I probably miss out on some that pertain to my interest, but I also save myself a lot of wasted time by reading things that do not interest me. This is a long-winded way of saying that to many people tags determine if your stories are read or not, so you may wish to consider using them for all of your stories.