All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 07'

Okay, two positive things about this installment are the interaction between Jaya and Jasmine, plus Jaya detecting the fraud.

But the story as a whole is going nowhere as long as Jaya and Jenny remain on the run. By this point in the story, Jaya should have managed to find out more specifics about what her legal problems actually are in order to combat them and get her own life back.

Other than being Trevor's concubine, she has no goals or direction to take. I can't stay interested in a story that is going nowhere. 4/5

@scottishTexan

I'm sorry you don't like the pacing. I can promise Jaya does develop other goals but at this point in the story she is still very much in "shelter in place" mode. She's very much a reactive protagonist, generally uncomfortable with the life she had and overwhelmed by her newfound power from the genie and everything it's led to. She isn't really focused on getting her old life back at this point.

Fun chapter, a sexy new dress, the fraud detected, Jasmine, wonderful anal sex, ... all good, thank you! ;-) TTFN