All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 12'

Check the names of your characters. There have been quite a few mistakes where you confused which of the three main ladies name you should have used.

Liking this chapter, a lot, ... And the way the twins breezed into Benedict's and Maria's life was awesome, ... thank you! ;-) TTFN

This is my favorite chapter, so far. I'm a big fan of the little guy getting the recognition and rewards he deserves. Perhaps a future chapter or separate story on Benny might be interesting?