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All Comments on 'Sister Golden Hair Delight Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I know that someone talked about editing yesterday, but I must say that it's beginning to flow quite nicely.

Five.

*****

gravyruggravyrugover 13 years ago
Well done

I do think you're laying the foreshadowing on just a bit too thick. We get it.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
why such a dual image?

new excitement mixed with a heavy darkness. ?

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